testing new non-autotools build system

[chaz/yoink] / doc / yoink.6.in

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@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@
 .SH NAME
 Yoink \- An alien-smashing action game.
 .SH SYNOPSIS
 .SH NAME
 Yoink \- An alien-smashing action game.
 .SH SYNOPSIS

-.B yoink [-h|--help] [-i|--info] [OPTION=VALUE]...
+.B yoink [-hi] [OPTION=VALUE]...

 .SH DESCRIPTION
 Leap tall buildings!  Crush stupid robots beneath your feet!  Wield your
 .SH DESCRIPTION
 Leap tall buildings!  Crush stupid robots beneath your feet!  Wield your

-extra-terrestrial powers in the defence of humanity, and send those alien
+extra-terrestrial powers in the defense of humanity, and send those alien

 invaders back from whence they came!
 
 You play the part of a flying alien heroine who must defend her home on
 invaders back from whence they came!
 
 You play the part of a flying alien heroine who must defend her home on


@@ -141,8 +141,8 @@ If set to a path of a valid directory (presumably your home directory),
 config file.
 .TP
 .I USER
 config file.
 .TP
 .I USER

-\fByoink\fP uses this variable to guess the user's nickname, for a high
-score entry or whatever.
+\fByoink\fP uses this variable as the user's name, for a high score entry
+or whatever.

 .TP
 .I YOINK_DATADIR
 If set to a path of a valid directory, \fByoink\fP will look in this
 .TP
 .I YOINK_DATADIR
 If set to a path of a valid directory, \fByoink\fP will look in this


@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ the \fBframerate\fP to a point such that the actual framerate is basically
 constant.  A constant 20fps or 30fps will look better than a sporadic
 40-60fps.  You can also decrease the \fBtimestep\fP at the expense of
 decreased simulation accuracy.  You'll have to experiment with this value
 constant.  A constant 20fps or 30fps will look better than a sporadic
 40-60fps.  You can also decrease the \fBtimestep\fP at the expense of
 decreased simulation accuracy.  You'll have to experiment with this value

-to find out acceptable levels.
+to determine acceptable levels.

 .PP
 If you are having audio problems, you may need to upgrade OpenAL.  Some
 systems still provide an old, busted version of OpenAL which may result in
 .PP
 If you are having audio problems, you may need to upgrade OpenAL.  Some
 systems still provide an old, busted version of OpenAL which may result in


@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@ of openal-soft, a high-quality software implementation that is still being
 maintained.
 .SH BUGS
 .IP \(bu 3
 maintained.
 .SH BUGS
 .IP \(bu 3

-The robots are currently lacking in intelligence.
+The robots aren't very bright.

 .IP \(bu
 Although the pixelated graphics are intentional, there are some unintended
 artifacts which are more obvious with certain video drivers.
 .PP
 .IP \(bu
 Although the pixelated graphics are intentional, there are some unintended
 artifacts which are more obvious with certain video drivers.
 .PP

-Send bug reports, patches, and love notes to:
+Send bug reports, patches and love notes to:

 .IP
 Charles McGarvey <@PACKAGE_BUGREPORT@>
 .SH AUTHOR
 .IP
 Charles McGarvey <@PACKAGE_BUGREPORT@>
 .SH AUTHOR