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 .SH NAME
 Yoink \- An alien-smashing action game.
 .SH SYNOPSIS
-.B yoink [-h|--help] [-i|--info] [OPTION=VALUE]...
+.B yoink [-hi] [OPTION=VALUE]...
 .SH DESCRIPTION
 Leap tall buildings!  Crush stupid robots beneath your feet!  Wield your
-extra-terrestrial powers in the defence of humanity, and send those alien
+extra-terrestrial powers in the defense of humanity, and send those alien
 invaders back from whence they came!
 
 You play the part of a flying alien heroine who must defend her home on
@@ -141,8 +141,8 @@ If set to a path of a valid directory (presumably your home directory),
 config file.
 .TP
 .I USER
-\fByoink\fP uses this variable to guess the user's nickname, for a high
-score entry or whatever.
+\fByoink\fP uses this variable as the user's name, for a high score entry
+or whatever.
 .TP
 .I YOINK_DATADIR
 If set to a path of a valid directory, \fByoink\fP will look in this
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ the \fBframerate\fP to a point such that the actual framerate is basically
 constant.  A constant 20fps or 30fps will look better than a sporadic
 40-60fps.  You can also decrease the \fBtimestep\fP at the expense of
 decreased simulation accuracy.  You'll have to experiment with this value
-to find out acceptable levels.
+to determine acceptable levels.
 .PP
 If you are having audio problems, you may need to upgrade OpenAL.  Some
 systems still provide an old, busted version of OpenAL which may result in
@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@ of openal-soft, a high-quality software implementation that is still being
 maintained.
 .SH BUGS
 .IP \(bu 3
-The robots are currently lacking in intelligence.
+The robots aren't very bright.
 .IP \(bu
 Although the pixelated graphics are intentional, there are some unintended
 artifacts which are more obvious with certain video drivers.
 .PP
-Send bug reports, patches, and love notes to:
+Send bug reports, patches and love notes to:
 .IP
 Charles McGarvey <@PACKAGE_BUGREPORT@>
 .SH AUTHOR